Bites Sur Abbywinter Can Anyone Please Correct My French Translation?

Can anyone please correct my french translation? - bites sur abbywinter

A girl relaxing in the sun. It is beige, while listening to music. It also has a magazine and a beverage. Two children see the girl behind a tree.

When the girl spoke with a man on the phone, crawling children in the back with a jug of water.

Suddenly the children for the water jug on the head of the girl. The girl was startled and dropped the magazine and spilled his drink.

While the child dry with a towel, a dog starts to chase the two boys.

The dog bites a foot of the child, but do not let go. The other child tries to start a dog of his friend.

Later, the girl helps the child with the injured foot, and the children learn their lesson.

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A girl relaxing in the sun. The pendant bronze listening to music. In addition, it has the journal of the United Nations and drink. Two attentive young daughter of a tree back.

While the girl in conversation with a man from the phone, Youth with a pitcher of his jockeyWater.

Suddenly, the young pitcher to pitch the girl's head. She and sister spilled drink diverted.

Supporters began to desiccate girl with a towel, a dog chases the young.

The dog bites the United Nations was the young, but he does not let go. The young drag it tries to have another dog of a friend.

After the wizard wounded girl with her foot, Youth and Their apprendent lesson.

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I think I made a few mistakes, and I was that "behind a tree" in the first set. In any case, this would be and use CAPS in the right spirit safe?